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:iconblueangel1122:
I love your use of different shades of blue, it makes this outfit very interesting looking but not overwhelming, which I think it could have been if a lot of colors had been used, well done.

The anatomy of this reminds me of fashion design sketches that I did for a while, if that was your intention then good job - you're on the right track! If not however, her legs may be a bit too long and her neck as well.

A couple other minor things, her arms - at the elbow joints - seem a bit stiff, a little bend in them would make them come across as a great deal more natural. Also, adding a little bit of a shape to the kneecap area would make her legs seem a little more realistic and create a sense of seamless flow down the leg, right now they look a bit choppy.

I LOVE how you handle the foot/ankle area, that is something I have struggled with for years, you did an outstanding job with that. My hat's off to you.

Also, great work in the waist/hip area - she looks thin but not boyish!

Overall - great job and keep practicing! happy trails! :)
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:iconl-karo-l:
why thaaaank you sooo much ^^ mostly for the critism :333 i`m very happy for that x3 yeah i know the neck is wayy to long i once tried to get away from drawing it like this but i guess i failed at that this time xD
but when i do fashion designs i always try to do the legs very long n_n; because i think it looks good X'D but of course i can change that too ^^

i`ll also try to change the thing with the elbows and the kneecaps ^w^ so that next time it looks better :D and a bit more realistic :3 thanks a gain sooo much for the critism i can always need it <3 *hug*

but also thanks for the compliments on the things i did good ^^ that makes the critism look not so bad xD *laughes* but it did help me thanks ^^

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Fashion put it all on me
Don't you want to see these clothes on me
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I am anyone you want me to be



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:iconblueangel1122:
hahaha you're very welcome!

Don't worry TOO much about the legs if you're studying fashion design, the legs for those drawings are supposed to be insanely long - I had a real problem doing the drawings because I'm such an anatomy freak. haha.

Glad I could help you out! Best of luck with your art!

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"....No, painting is not done to decorate apartments. It is an instrument of war."

-Pablo Picasso
:iconl-karo-l:
werll i`m not studiyng fashion design...at the moment xD poorly but i want to do so in some years lol xD
well but if you say so i`ll just do them as long as i always do xD (because i actually like it that way allthought it would look scary in real life if you would see people with such awefull long legs xD )

thanks for wishing me luck too i can need it ;D

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*gets shot*

Fashion put it all on me
Don't you want to see these clothes on me
Fashion put it all on me
I am anyone you want me to be



avater was made by ~pittysoares :3
:iconblueangel1122:
haha well I hope you pursue it if you really like it!

hahaha! yeah - the anatomy isn't usually the first priority with fashion drawings, the clothing is. xD

<333

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"....No, painting is not done to decorate apartments. It is an instrument of war."

-Pablo Picasso
:iconl-karo-l:
i hope so too XDD but i`m sure i will :P

true xD and good for me i guess XD *laughes*

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*gets shot*

Fashion put it all on me
Don't you want to see these clothes on me
Fashion put it all on me
I am anyone you want me to be



avater was made by ~pittysoares :3

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